The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future developement of the site.

The given maps depict an industrial zone

on

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the

town

of Norbiton

,

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and

managed

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future changes

of

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in

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the area.

Overall

, the yard of factories will be reconstructed and become an urbanaside place with roundabouts and housings. In terms

precipitation

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, the

town

is located between a river which is located northern, and a main

road

that

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is

placed

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located

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southern. At the same time , the river is

being

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a border between the

town

and

a

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farmland.

While

,

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the

town

has a roundabout in the centre which is linked

with

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the main

road

.

Also

, the cycle has

an

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another route which

towards

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to

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the east. Interestingly, in the centre, almost all sides of the

road

is

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are

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arounded

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surrounded

by the factories.

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, a future plan

is amounted

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from new places.All factories will be replaced and

built

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new housings. Shops will

locate

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on the south-west side of the

town

near the old roundabout. Notably,

medical

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centre will stay near it, on the other side of the

road

between the old and a new roundabout which will be built on the part of the main

road

. At the same moment,

will appear

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a school and a playground

eastern

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near the east route. In the North will be constructed a new bridge and

a housings

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housing

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on the other side of the river.