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Band 5

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter - Introduce yourself - explain what is wrong with the furniture - say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Landlord,
This
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 side Navdeep . Hope
this
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 letter finds you well. I am writing
this
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 letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the furniture I
recieved
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received
 in my apartment. Actually, when I sat on the
chair
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 I
come
Wrong verb form
came
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 to know that
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the chair
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chair
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chair's
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 left leg was broken
due to
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 which I
am
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was
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 unable to use
a
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the
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chair
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.
In addition
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 to
this
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, there is a big window in my room that
also
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 I found broken , because of
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 I hear loud noise at night because construction work was going
next
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on next
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 to my room.
Therefore
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 , I request you to have
look
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a look
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 at
this
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 matter and provide me
a
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with a
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new
chair
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 as I am a student ,so I have to do homework and for
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 ,I need a
chair
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 for my study table.
Morover
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Moreover
, kindly send the carpenter as soon as possible to fix the window. Looking Forward for your positive response . yours sincerely, Navdeep

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language
Improve accuracy in English expressing time accurately ('come to know that chair left leg was broken' should be 'came to know that the chair's left leg is broken').
clarity
Ensure all sentences clearly convey the exact meaning ('Actually, when I sat on the chair I come to know...' should be 'When I sat on the chair, I noticed...').
content
The letter successfully conveys the main issues with specific examples (broken chair leg, broken window).
tone
The tone is polite and formal, which is appropriate for a letter to a landlord.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rented accommodation
  • Tenancy
  • Malfunctioning
  • Worn-out
  • Broken
  • Inconvenience
  • Repair or replace
  • Urgency
  • Comfort
  • Safety
  • Budget
  • Specific property
  • Immediate action
  • Inadequate condition
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