You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter - Introduce yourself - explain what is wrong with the furniture - say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Landlord,
This
side Navdeep . Hope this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the furniture I recieved
in my apartment.
Actually, when I sat on the Correct your spelling
received
chair
I come
to know that Wrong verb form
came
Correct article usage
the chair
chair
left leg was broken Change noun form
chair's
due to
which I am
unable to use Wrong verb form
was
a
Correct article usage
the
chair
. In addition
to this
, there is a big window in my room that also
I found broken , because of this
I hear loud noise at night because construction work was going next
to my room.
Change preposition
on next
Therefore
, I request you to have look
at Correct article usage
a look
this
matter and provide me a
new Add the preposition
with a
chair
as I am a student ,so I have to do homework and for this
,I need a chair
for my study table. Morover
, kindly send the carpenter as soon as possible to fix the window.
Looking Forward for your positive response .
yours sincerely,
NavdeepCorrect your spelling
Moreover
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language
Improve accuracy in English expressing time accurately ('come to know that chair left leg was broken' should be 'came to know that the chair's left leg is broken').
clarity
Ensure all sentences clearly convey the exact meaning ('Actually, when I sat on the chair I come to know...' should be 'When I sat on the chair, I noticed...').
content
The letter successfully conveys the main issues with specific examples (broken chair leg, broken window).
tone
The tone is polite and formal, which is appropriate for a letter to a landlord.