Logging of the rain frosts is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Admittedly, environmental issues have become

the

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globalised problem that humanity must pay more attention

.

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Even though logging brings

advantage

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advantages

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to economics and local

resident

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residents

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earn wages. I strongly agree that logging

of

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the rain

frosts

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is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. The reasons are provided in

this

essay.

To begin

with,

environment

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is the main factor that allows living creatures extinction. Nature surrounds us and supplies all the resources to living species.

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,

tree

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is

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one of the essential resources that benefit

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all

being

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.

Tree

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produces

oxygen

,

reduces

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carbon dioxide and

creates

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humidity which brings rainfall to the earth. Without

trees

,

this

planet would lack

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oxygen

, humidity absence and insufficient rainy season.

Oxygen

is a vital gas that gives cells

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to break down food into energy. Inadequate

of

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oxygen

possibly lead to crisis symptoms

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increase

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heart rate, dizziness and

lose

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consciousness

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. Cutting down

trees

,

this

world would experience water shortage which water is the primary

needs

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for

surviving

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and daily routine. Deforestation could feasibly raise

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the planet

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planet

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temperature

due to

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of

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oxygen

production,

hence

the sun and heatwaves directly reach to earth’s surface.

Additionally

,

trees

help to protect

rapid

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against rapid

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flood

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when it is

a

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heavy rain.

Moreover

,

trees

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roots can help stabilise the soil, especially against shallow landslides. To summarise,

tree

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offers significant benefits to all species on

this

planet. Logging of the rain frosts can cause serious consequences to human and animal life. People should seek

for

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a new alternative resources

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instead

of cutting

trees

. The government should encourage their people to save the environment

otherwise

, the living species will not remain alive for a long time.