The table and charts below provide information about the destinations and employment of UK first degree holders. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below provide information about the destinations and employment of UK first degree holders.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows how many
first degree
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holders chose to study or work over every academic year from 2007 to 2010. and pie charts illustrate how much money people who graduated in 2009 and 2010 have earned. In general, most
first degree
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graduates decide to apply for full-time jobs, and
besides
, the masses of people who graduated in 2009 and 2010 usually earned 20000-24999
pounds
. Students were inclined to acquire full-time positions, and the number has remained over 60 since 2007 when the figure was 64, except for 2009 when the figure was 59.
Next,
some students would go on their studies and the number fell a range of 16-18 on average.
Additionally
, 11-15 people were not employed in every academy between 2007 and 2010.
Finally
, fewer humans did part-time occupations and study simultaneously, and the figure
also
decreased from 9 to 7 over the past few years.
According to
the pie, the majority of graduates who finish their studies, whether males or females acquired 10000-24999
pounds
generally, plus 32% of females, 26% of male workers had 20000-24999
pounds
.
Similarly
, the female number(22%) who attained 10000-14999
pounds
was larger than males(19%).
Consequently
, as for humans who attained 15000-19999
pounds
, both genders comprised the same percentage (29%).
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