Some people think any form of experimentation on animals for any reason is wrong. They believe all such experiments should be banned. Others think the benefits research offers us in terms of medical advances make experiments on animals worthwhile. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a divided opinion of people regarding the

use

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animals

for

expiremental

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experimental

purposes.

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some individuals consider it as a form of violation of rights, it is undeniable that it stands its purpose for exploration of knowledge. In

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I will discuss its benefits and drawbacks. The

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animals

for

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of learning exists today with a lot of

purpose

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. Mainly,

this

practice

is highly observe

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in medical schools in order to gain

understanding

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of how systems and drugs work. One of the advantages of utilizing

animals

is to unlock the vast possibilities of medicinal discoveries.

In addition

to creating wonder drugs, the organisms can be used to screen harmful substances without testing

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human

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body. Take an example, most of the capsules that

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in the pharmacies today have undergone trial testing on rats first.

This

ensures the safety of the person before it will be sold

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the stores.

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, it posed harm and

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the lives of the mice. On the one hand,

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the eyes of

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animal advocates involving

animals

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technological innovation for medical practice is selfish. It creates controversy, as it is morally wrong to endanger the powerless creatures just for worldly gain. Amenably, it is practical to

use

animals

rather than human flesh for

expirementation

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experimentation

, yet it is unfair for the creatures to become the sacrificial lamb. Despite the opposing views on the

use

of

animals

for medical advancements, I am in favour of it.

Due to

numerous benefits it entails

such

as minimal harm

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people,

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on operation and the availability of

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. In conclusion,

animal-

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use

for research purposes weighs more benefits,

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even though

there

are

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strong opposition

of

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its practice. The drawbacks

such

as moral and spiritual reasons are considerably important, yet

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lesser impact on the advantages it provides.