Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?

Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.

To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?
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in juvenile crimes among
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. Some psychologist claims that the reason is
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teachers and parents do not give a proper
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proper
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guidance
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  • juvenile crime
  • social and emotional learning
  • parental guidance
  • educational system
  • technology addiction
  • media influence
  • behavioral patterns
  • societal issues
  • economic disparities
  • comprehensive intervention
  • crime prevention strategies
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