The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the
chart
indicates the different averages of protein
and calories in four areas, in addition
, the chart
ultimates the domination of North America
however
the peak point
of protein
and calorise
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calories
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meanwhile
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India is the lowest Correct your spelling
while
point
at only 13 of animals the lowest point
of both figures,
The first chart
gives the highest number of both types of protein
(animal and other protein
) at 62 and 18, respectively. While
the lowest average protein
is India at 13 animal protein
and 15 other protein
, East Africa gives (16 and 15), and Latin Fix the agreement mistake
proteins
America
at ( 32 and 13).
On the other hand
, the second chart
shows the average of calories, obviously the averages are not quite far compared with the protein
averages, however
, North America
still dominates the scene with the peak point
at 3500 in contrast
, India still has the lowest average at 2000, meanwhile East Africa and Latin America
reach 2200 and2800 respectively.Submitted by Mido on
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