Some people feel that fashion is like art and a significant part of society, while others feel that fashion is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many

people

argue that

fashion

plays a crucial role in society, and it

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an art.

Although

other

people

believe that

fashion

waste

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people

’s

time

and money. In

this

essay, I will discuss both sides of

this

issue and suggest that

fashion

is important in life. Opponents of

fashion

thinks

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that it can be a huge waste of

time

and money. Keeping up with the latest

fashion

trend

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is

time

-consuming because we spend a lot of

time

for

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browsing a variety of websites to find for ourselves many items of the right price, size, and brand which we want to own, and trends change frequently.

Besides

some

people

have the fear of missing out; they purchase so many things that are on sale or limited editions of clothing, but they will not use them.

For example

, Kido, which is a renowned teenage girl’s brand of clothing in Vietnam, often releases many limited seasonal

stuffs

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such

as some kinds of

winter’s

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jacket

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. It makes those customers

are

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curious and have the fear of missing out if they do not possess these items right now.

In addition

, it is understandable that some

people

might think that

fashion

is wasteful. They believed that because they could buy so many stuffs which were on sale or even attractive appearance;

then

they

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not use them as these items

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not have

the

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specific purposes

to use

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and

have

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bad quality.

On the other hand

, I firmly believe that

fashion

is similar to art and can be important for society.

Firstly

, sometimes

fashion

is important to make us

fir

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fit

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in certain situations, to be more polite or formal.

For instance

, when a person has a job interview, it is good for them to wear a

suite

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suit

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or some sophisticated

attires

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. Wearing suitable suits can help them enhance the impression at

first

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time

meeting.

Secondly

,

fashion

helps us to express ourselves

as well as

our personality

,

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so that we can feel more confident and powerful, which boosts our mental health as well.

Finally

,

fashion

can

also

show the cultural civilizations. Each country will have its unique culture of traditional clothing which existed

along with

so many decades until nowadays. Traditional costumes like a symbol show how their country experienced many ups and downs in history but still

remain

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its unique culture.

For example

, we can mention some traditional costumes

such

as

a

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“Ao dai” which is a special costume of Vietnamese women, it shows the gentleness, grace, and pure beauty of Vietnamese women. In conclusion,

while

there are arguments on both sides, I still believe that

fashion

somewhat plays an essential part in society, and it

also

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like art because it can give us a lot of meaningful beauty.