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Band 5.5

You have arranged a weekend holiday with a group of friends, but due to your studies you will now be unable to go with them. Write to your friends: -Tell them why you are unable to go. -Say sorry for this. -Suggest an alternative activity at another time.

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Dear friends, how are you,
guys
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? I am writing to you to tell you that I won't be able to make it to the weekend vacation plan with all
other
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my other
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 friends as
i
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I
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 just saw that
i
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I
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 have to submit
mid-term
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a mid-term
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 project
that is
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 due on
weekend
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the weekend
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 only. I know it is going to make you
guys
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 desolate as we planned something like
this
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 after so long. Since everyone changed their respective plans just to have fun together and now it is going to be all cancelled because of me, I
appologise
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apologise
 for
this
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, even though
i
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I
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 know sorry is not going to work as you
guys
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 might be feeling low.
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, I swear
i
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I
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 will be
already
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ready
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 to go
anywere
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anywhere
 with you
guys
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 when i will be done with
this
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 project from school. Either everyone can come to my house so we can decide or you
guys
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 can decide when and where we can meet and have fun. I will be okay with anything as
this
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 plan got
cancel
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cancelled
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 because of me. I will be waiting for your reply. regards
simran
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grammar
Proofread your letter to spot and correct minor grammatical errors such as capitalizing "i" and ensuring the word "apologize" is spelled correctly.
writing-structure
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.
writing-tone
The tone of the letter is very friendly and appropriate, making it engaging for your friends.
task-response
You have clearly expressed reasons for not being able to attend, apologized sincerely, and provided a thoughtful alternative suggestion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed with study commitments
  • important exams
  • require my full attention
  • miss out
  • looking forward to
  • plan a fun day out
  • short trip
  • hiking
  • theme park
  • relaxing weekend
  • nearby resort
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