You have arranged a weekend holiday with a group of friends, but due to your studies you will now be unable to go with them. Write to your friends: -Tell them why you are unable to go. -Say sorry for this. -Suggest an alternative activity at another time.

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Dear friends, how are you,

guys

? I am writing to you to tell you that I won't be able to make it to the weekend vacation plan with all

other

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my other

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friends as

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just saw that

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have to submit

mid-term

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a mid-term

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project

that is

due on

weekend

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the weekend

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only. I know it is going to make you

guys

desolate as we planned something like

this

after so long. Since everyone changed their respective plans just to have fun together and now it is going to be all cancelled because of me, I

appologise

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apologise

for

this

, even though

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know sorry is not going to work as you

guys

might be feeling low.

However

, I swear

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will be

already

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ready

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to go

anywere

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anywhere

with you

guys

when i will be done with

this

project from school. Either everyone can come to my house so we can decide or you

guys

can decide when and where we can meet and have fun. I will be okay with anything as

this

plan got

cancel

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because of me. I will be waiting for your reply. regards

simran

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grammar

Proofread your letter to spot and correct minor grammatical errors such as capitalizing "i" and ensuring the word "apologize" is spelled correctly.

writing-structure

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

writing-tone

The tone of the letter is very friendly and appropriate, making it engaging for your friends.

task-response

You have clearly expressed reasons for not being able to attend, apologized sincerely, and provided a thoughtful alternative suggestion.

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

overwhelmed with study commitments
important exams
require my full attention
miss out
looking forward to
plan a fun day out
short trip
hiking
theme park
relaxing weekend
nearby resort

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