The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban rural households in a certain country that had internet access between 2011 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban rural households in a certain country that had internet access between 2011 and 2016. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the proportion of rural/suburban and rural
areas
of certain places that
access
the
internet
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Internet
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between the years 2011 and 2016.
Overall
, it clearly can be seen that, during the first year until the
last
year, household
internet
access
increased dramatically in both
areas
. In 2011, only 15
percent
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per cent
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homes
of rural/suburban had
internet
access
,
while
less than 5
percent
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per cent
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of rural
homes
had it. By following years, in 2012
internet
access
in urban/suburban groups had doubled to 30
percent
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per cent
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while
in rural
homes
it rose slightly, to around 5
percent
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per cent
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. Over the next years, the availability of the
internet
experienced a climb in both
areas
.
Then
, between 2014 and 2016, the percentage of both
areas
with
internet
connection remained steady, at close to 50
percent
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. Meanwhile, the percentage of rural
homes
continued growing and reached a peak
at
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of
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35
percent
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per cent
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by 2016.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, access, internet, percent, homes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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