The tables below give information about the consumption and production of potatoes in different world regions in 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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potato

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consumption

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per person and the quantity of

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produced in five different regions in 2006.

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, it can be seen clearly that Europe, Asia, and Oceania hold the highest levels in both the

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and production of potatoes. Meanwhile, the figures for Africa,

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and South

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and Central

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were insubstantial. To be more specific, Europe stayed on top of the chart of

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consumption

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, with 96.1kg per person. With roughly 58kg, North

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stood at the second top position. Asia/ Oceania and South and Central

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had almost the same figures, with 25.8kg and 23.6kg respectively.

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, Africa was the least

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region, with 14.1kg per person. In the second chart, Asia/ Oceania and Europe were the top two regions with

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potato

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production, with 131.2

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and 126.3

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respectively.

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to the enormous number of its

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, North

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manufactured 24.7

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tonnes of potatoes per year.

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, the figure for Africa was 16.4

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, which was nearly 1

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more than South

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