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In some cities and towns all over the world, traffic jam is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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Recently, traffic
jam
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has
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 become a headache for most working
people
 in both big
cites
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cities
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 and towns. From my perspective, several reasons account for the problem. On the one hand, with the rapid development of technology and society, motor cars and electric
car
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 are becoming more affordable for most families. And the
morden
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modern
 devices do bring about more convenience and comfort to families, whose travels from and to work or school are getting much
more
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easier and more pleasing, especially during
tough
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day
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 with rains or storms.
One
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 the other hand, with higher living
standard
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standards
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, it seems that owning a car is a symbol of
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 man's status and living
condition
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. So once it becomes affordable,
people
 would rush
stores
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 to purchase one. In
this
 sense, more cars are appearing on the roads and the traffic becomes busier and more difficult. Anyway, there are ways out of
this
 condition, if governments take
their
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responsibility to better facilitate the travel net and strictly supervise the drivers'
behaviors
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, which will
also
 greatly decline the tragedies on the road.
Furthermore
,
people
 need to have a reasonable attitude towards cars. Public transportation should not escape from
mytravel
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my travel
 priority list. All in all, traffic
jam
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does
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 make
people
waiting
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 and
wasting
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 more time, even at the cost of lives. And the only way to work out is to make smart choices.
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You identified and elaborated on multiple causes of traffic jams, showcasing a good understanding of the topic.
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The essay outlines realistic solutions, emphasizing government responsibility and behavior change.

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