The increase in production and consumption of meat has resulted in the destruction of the natural environment. What is the cause?What can be done to solve the problem?

Some

people

believe that

production

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and consumption of

meat

is

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are

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detrimental to the

environment

. The cause of

this

problem

is

raising

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apply

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an increasing

number

of

farm

animals

. The solution to

this

problem

is

people

should be encouraged to become

vegeterians

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vegetarians

.

Production

and consumption of

meat

destructs

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destroy

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the natural

environment

because the

number

of

farm

animals

are

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is

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increasing. To meet the demand of a large

number

of

population

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the population

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,

the

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meat

production

needs to be increased.

Therefore

, the

number

of

farm

animals

have been increased. Raising

this

large

number

of

farm

animals

results in a significant amount of

carbon

emissions

, which is harmful to the

environment

.

For example

, in Australia, raising

farm

animals

for

meat

production

covers 56% of

total

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the total

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carbon

emissions

of the

country

. To solve

this

problem

,

people

should be inspired to become vegetarians. If

people

of a

country

mostly consume

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a vegeterian

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vegeterian

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vegetarian

diet, there will be no need for raising

farm

animals

for

meat

consumption. The

environment

of the

country

will be saved,

and

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carbon

emissions

will be reduced, and the natural environmental

destructions

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destruction

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will no longer

be

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happend

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happen

.

For instance

, in India, around 65% of

population

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the population

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is

vegeterians

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vegetarians

vegetarian

,

therefore

,

this

country

is free from the environmental hazards related to

meat

production

. In conclusion, the cause of natural

environment

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environmental

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destructions

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destruction

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is

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the raising

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raising

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rising

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number

of

farm

animals

because of the increase

of

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in

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carbon

emissions

.

Solution

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The solution

A solution

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to

this

problem

is inspiring

people

to become

vegeterians

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vegetarians

.