The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given charts illustrate the proportions of elderly
men
and
women
workers
aged 60-64 in four major countries; Australia,
Japan
, the USA, and Belgium in 1970 and 2000. Units measured in percentage of
men
and
women
aged 60-64.
Overall
, it clearly can be seen that the highest percentages of
employees
aged 60-64 in
both
genders in
overall
periods are in
Japan
.
Moreover
, the lowest number of
women
employees
is in Belgium. In terms of the highest total of
workers
men
and
women
aged 60-64 in
Japan
, in the first year, the
men
group started at 76 and increased and reached a peak at 84 in 2000.
Furthermore
, the
women
groups in that year stood at 40 and in the next thirty years stood at precisely 43.
While
Japan
is in first place in
both
genders, Australia has the second most
men
, elderly
workers
, in 1970 started at 47, and in the following years experienced a significant rise to 74 in the
last
periods. Meanwhile, the
women
workers
group in Australia stood at 18 by the year 2000. Regarding the lowest percentage of
women
employees
, Belgium started at 7, and in 2000 relatively stable at 8. In the
last
country, the USA experienced a relatively stable percentage of
both
and
women
in
both
years.
Women
and
men
employees
in 2000 ended in 70 and 36 respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, workers, japan, employees, both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment rate
  • Percentage
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Gender disparity
  • Trend
  • Decline
  • Improvement
  • Variation
  • Noteworthy
  • Aligned
  • Comparative analysis
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