Nowadays, employees spend
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amount of
time
in their workplace, and there is an
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that
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must get weekends longer than it is now and the working weeks must be shorter. I totally agree with
this
initiative because allowing them to get more free
time
reduces the
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chances and increases the task
performance
.
One of the main causes why firms and workplaces should reduce working
time
during the week is to protect their
workers
from getting into
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called job
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.
While
the main cause of working is money gaining, achieving
this
goal with working beyond the body's actual capacity results in the
workers
having hate feelings
their jobs.
Although
some of these feelings can lead
workers
to give up their
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job,
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this
can grow up to give more serious outcome, like suicide.
For example
, the rate of
among
workers
was
in countries
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people had more holidays,
while
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countries like South Korea where the average weekly working hours is 60 the rate was higher.
The other main reason why hiring firms should give more free
time
to their people is to help them get
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higher level of
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performance
. When an
spends more
time
with his family and
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his own social
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, he will have a goal pushing him to
work
harder
and Correct word choice
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a family to discuss his project with and a company to talk about his achievement.
However
, taking
this
free
time
from him will give him the sensation of
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of goal, which
then
affects his
work
performance
.
For example
, a study in the US pointed out that when
workers
spend more
time
with
thereCorrect your spelling
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family and friends and
work
lessChange the quantifier
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hours during the week, they report that their task
performance
and
work
connection
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.
In conclusion, giving the
more
time
to spend with their relatives
increaseCorrect subject-verb agreement
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their
work
productivity and
reduceCorrect subject-verb agreement
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the opportunity of having
work
burn outCorrect your spelling
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. So I believe reducing the working days and increasing the free
timesFix the agreement mistake
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will be
inChange preposition
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the side of both employers and
employeeFix the agreement mistake
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.