The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter ·say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party ·explain why you won't be able to attend the party ·give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time
Dear Mr and Mrs Collins,I got so excited when I saw your letter, I hope everyone in the family doing ok.
firt
of all, I wanted to thank you for inviting me to Correct your spelling
First
Chris
's birthday party
, you know we have not seen eachother
since summer started and school were closed.
Correct your spelling
each other
Also
, I think this
is the best idea to surprise Chris
since he had a very hard school year, I
could not see him going out because of all the homeworks
and exams, he really needs Correct your spelling
homework
some
Correct determiner usage
a
party
like this
with all the people he loves.
As the
matter of fact, my grandmother Correct article usage
a
had
booked her Unnecessary verb
apply
surjery
Correct your spelling
surgery
last
month for June 21st, and I have to go to her city to help her because as you know she does not have anyone who wants to participate in this
surjery
. I am afraid I will not be able to attend Correct your spelling
surgery
survey
this
party
in
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on
although
I have to come back the next week for my late projects, so if there is a way that the party
could take place in the first week of July, It will be a great opportunity for me to see Chris
and be one of the people who surprise him and make him happy.
thanks again for inviting me and accept my apologise
, I will call Replace the word
apologies
Chris
and explain it to him after the party
. give my best to everyone in the family, hope to see you soon.
your
sincerely, Parmida.Correct pronoun usage
Yours
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suitable writing tone
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complete response
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