The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
the chart shows the
percentages
of the children's journey to their school and classifies four types of Use synonyms
distance
and four types of transportation.
at Use synonyms
first,
the chart illustrated that walking dominated at85% septically with short Linking Words
distances
between 0-1 Use synonyms
miles
, Use synonyms
while
with the short Linking Words
distance
, the average of walking in Use synonyms
distance
between 2-5 Use synonyms
miles
was the lowest point, Use synonyms
however
riding a bicycle nearly gave the same range Linking Words
thus
, the Linking Words
distance
between 1-2 Use synonyms
miles
was dominated at 72%, main Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
distance
from 0-1 Use synonyms
miles
and 2-5 Use synonyms
miles
give approximately the same Use synonyms
percentages
at 50% and 49% respectively.
Use synonyms
In addition
, the bus gave high Linking Words
percentages
with Use synonyms
distances
2.5 and over 5 Use synonyms
miles
, Use synonyms
while
gave low Linking Words
percentages
with short Use synonyms
distances
1-2 and 2-5 Use synonyms
miles
at only 5%and 10% respectively, rather than care gave same range with all types of Use synonyms
distances
fluctuated between 10% to 30%, both Use synonyms
distances
from 2-5 and over 5 gave 30% Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
distance
between 0-1 was 10% and from 2-5 was 20%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentages, distance, distances, miles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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