The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
the chart shows the
percentages
of the children's journey to their school and classifies four types of distance
and four types of transportation.
at first,
the chart illustrated that walking dominated at85% septically with short distances
between 0-1 miles
, while
with the short distance
, the average of walking in distance
between 2-5 miles
was the lowest point, however
riding a bicycle nearly gave the same range thus
, the distance
between 1-2 miles
was dominated at 72%, main while
the distance
from 0-1 miles
and 2-5 miles
give approximately the same percentages
at 50% and 49% respectively.
In addition
, the bus gave high percentages
with distances
2.5 and over 5 miles
, while
gave low percentages
with short distances
1-2 and 2-5 miles
at only 5%and 10% respectively, rather than care gave same range with all types of distances
fluctuated between 10% to 30%, both distances
from 2-5 and over 5 gave 30% while
the distance
between 0-1 was 10% and from 2-5 was 20%.Submitted by Mido on
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