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Band 5.5

Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do

#friend #children #house #weekend #arrangement #time
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Dear Sheela, It was nice to
here
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hear
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 from you, since we
last
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 met at your birthday party. It is my pleasure to have Roy and Sheena at my place on
weekend
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the weekend
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 as they are fun to spend
time
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wtih
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with
 them. As I don't have any plans for
weekend
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the weekend
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, I will be
appy
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happy
 to
spent
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spend
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 quality
time
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 with
kids
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the kids
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. It has been a long
time
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 since I have seen them and my kids would love to play with them. You don't have to worry about their daily routine, I will make sure they go to bed on
time
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 and have
health
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 food. Any
time
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 of the day would be suitable because I will be at home
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the hole
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hole
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whole
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 weekend.
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, give me a call
be fore
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before
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 you arrive, just in case I am away from home.
Makesure
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Make sure
 that they have their medicines or multivitamins if they are taking any. I have planned everything in advance once they get here. On Saturday, we will have
a
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supper in my backyard
while
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 playing football.
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Further more
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, we will go to
game
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a game
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 zone located
in
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downtown where
well
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will
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 spend our entire Sunday playing video games. And
at the end
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, we will go to
restaurant
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a restaurant
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 for dinner. Hoping to see you soon. Best regards,
Lodu
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Loud
.
Submitted by Darshita@8612 on

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task achievement
Ensure to check for small grammatical errors such as 'here' instead of 'hear' and 'appy' instead of 'happy'.
coherence cohesion
Try breaking long sentences into shorter ones to improve readability.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are done well, making the letter feel friendly and welcoming.
task achievement
All parts of the task are addressed, and the responses are complete, touching on each required point.
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