Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do
Dear Sheela,
It was nice to
here
from you, since we Correct your spelling
hear
last
met at your birthday party. It is my pleasure to have Roy and Sheena at my place on weekend
as they are fun to spend Add an article
the weekend
time
wtih
them.
As I don't have any plans for Correct your spelling
with
weekend
, I will be Add an article
the weekend
appy
to Correct your spelling
happy
spent
quality Wrong verb form
spend
time
with kids
. It has been a long Correct article usage
the kids
time
since I have seen them and my kids would love to play with them. You don't have to worry about their daily routine, I will make sure they go to bed on time
and have health
food.
Any Replace the word
healthy
time
of the day would be suitable because I will be at home Correct article usage
the hole
hole
weekend. Correct your spelling
whole
However
, give me a call be fore
you arrive, just in case I am away from home. Correct your spelling
before
Makesure
that they have their medicines or multivitamins if they are taking any.
I have planned everything in advance once they get here. On Saturday, we will have Correct your spelling
Make sure
a
supper in my backyard Remove the article
apply
while
playing football. Further more
, we will go to Correct your spelling
Furthermore
game
zone located Add an article
a game
in
downtown where Change preposition
apply
well
spend our entire Sunday playing video games. And Correct your spelling
will
at the end
, we will go to restaurant
for dinner.
Hoping to see you soon.
Best regards,
Add an article
a restaurant
the restaurant
Lodu
.Correct your spelling
Loud
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task achievement
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are done well, making the letter feel friendly and welcoming.
task achievement
All parts of the task are addressed, and the responses are complete, touching on each required point.