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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart bar illustrates critical information about the
number
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 of families' yearly
income
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 in the United States of America in 3 various periods starting in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
This
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 unit is measured in millions.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that 2015 is taking the majority of household
income
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.
While
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 2007 and 2011 have nearly the same statistics of household
income
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.
According to
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 the data, the biggest annual
income
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 in the
year
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 2015 was $100,00 or more and had 32
million
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households
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, and the second amount of many is $25,000-$49,999
as well as
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 less than $25,000, and the
number
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 of
households
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 is 27 and 28
million
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 respectively. the lowest
income
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 in the
year
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 2015 was $75,000-$99,999 and
number
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 of
households
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 was 15
million
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. In terms of the
year
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 2011 and 2007, the largest yearly
income
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 in 2011, and 2007 was $25,000-$49,999 for the
year
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 2011, and
also
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 $100,000 or more for 2011. and the
number
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 of
households
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 is 29 and 29.5 respectively.
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as
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As
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 well as $50,000-$74,999 and $75,000-$99,999 they have the same
number
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 of families about like 14 and 21.
In addition
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, the yearly
income
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 of $100,000 in 2011 is a bit below the 2007
in
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of
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 -1
million
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. and yearly
income
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 of $25,000-$49,999 and less than $25,000 in the
year
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 2007 is 25 and 27
million
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, income, year, million, households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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