The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart compares data about the annual GDP growth in 3 different countries Tunisia,
Japan
and Ecuador between 2007
to
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2010.
Overall
, It is crucial that the trends of all countries other than
Japan
reduced over the period of 3 years.
According to
the diagram, at the beginning,Tunisia, was the best country on the bar chart with 6,3%
then
it immediately declined and reported just over 3% in 2009 After, its proportion roughly stabilized until 2010. The next country is Ecuador in 2007 rate of GDP was 3,1% it rapidly increased to 4,9% in 2008 but the rate of
this
country was not stable among other nations.
On the other hand
,
Japan
shows the best statistics, in 2007 it was 2% and in the coming 3 years it fluctuated from 2% to 6,3
as well as
it is the top background on the bar chart. In the end,
Japan
becomes first place among other countries with 6,3
percentage
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on a plot.
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