The graph below shows the population figures for different type of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012
The line chart shows the
population
of different species of turtles
in India from 1980 to 2012. Overall
, Olive Ridley Turtles
received Add an article
a dramatical
dramatical
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dramatic
increase
in population
while
Leatherback turtles
and Green turtles
noticed dwindling
in their Correct article usage
a dwindling
population
.
Olive Ridley turtles
saw a surge in population
over the years
. There were only around a hundred of them in 1980 before a steady increase
in population
from around 110 in 1988 to nearly 120 in 1994. There was a sharp increase
in population
from an estimate of 120 to nearly 140 in a span of 4 years
. Over the following years
it noticed sharp ups and downs with increases in 2004 and 2006 and decreases in 2002 and 2008.
Leatherback Add a comma
years,
turtles
and green turtles
perceived a decrease in population
over the years
. Leatherback turtles
received an increase
in population
from 1984 to 1988 before plummeting from around 110 in 1988 to nearly 80 in 1994. It continues
to slowly decrease its Wrong verb form
continued
population
to less than 60 of them in 2012. Green turtles
saw vicious ups and downs in population
before slowly dwindling in number.Submitted by asllchkied on
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