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The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart depicts 3 distinct
electricity
 sources (fossil
fuel
,
hydro
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hydropower
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power
, and nuclear
power
) for 4 different countries during the period from 2003 to 2008.
Overall
, all 4 countries had different preferences for
electricity
 sources throughout the period. To commence, within
such
 a period, fossil
fuel
 predominated India’s
electricity
 supply, accounting for 82%.
However
, the percentage of
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 and nuclear
power
 that was utilized for
electricity
 in India remained relatively low at 14% and 4% respectively, indicating a noticeable disparity.
In contrast
, in Morocco,
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 was the dominant source of
electricity
 at 95%,
whereas
 the percentage of fossil
fuel
 for
electricity
 demands was 90% less compared to
hydro
power’s
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power
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, illustrating a tremendous gap.
On the other hand
, between 2003 and 2008, in Sweden,
hydro
 and nuclear
power
 contributed nearly identical percentages for
electricity
, amounting to roughly 50% on average for each source.
Conversely
, fossil
fuel
 only produced roughly 40% less than
hydro
 and nuclear
power
 for Sweden’s
electricity
 needs.
Additionally
, in Vietnam, 56% of the proportion of
electricity
source
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sources
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 came from fossil
fuel
,
while
 the remaining 44% was produced from
hydro
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hydropower
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power
, presenting a slight gap.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, fuel, hydro, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity generation
  • Energy sources
  • Coal-powered
  • Natural gas
  • Nuclear energy
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Renewable resources
  • Energy mix
  • Clean energy
  • Sustainable practices
  • Trend analysis
  • Environmental impact
  • Energy transition
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Energy reliance
  • Energy portfolio
  • Year-over-year comparison
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