You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the total
percentage
of
films
released and the total
percentage
of tickets
sales
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sold
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in 1996 and 2006 in a nation. Substantially,
drama
films
were being produced in the highest level of quantities, but
comedy
films
won the largest
percentage
of cinema ticket
sales
. Romance
films
had
least
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the least
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production in 1996 and 2006, and
least
Correct article usage
the least
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sales
in only 2006,
while
that is
fantasy
movie
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movies
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in 1996 with
lowest
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the lowest
show examples
sales
. Generally, the order of
percentage
of film released is always in
drama
,
comedy
,
fantasy
and romance. In 2006, the
percentages
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percentage
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of
film
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films
show examples
released
were
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was
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higher than that in 1996, except for romance, which was the same with a number of 6%.
Drama
movies increased from 26% to 35%,
comedy
movies
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were
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5% higher, and
fantasy
movies were being released more from 12% to 16%.
However
, the order of
percentage
of cinema ticket
sales
is a lot different, which is
comedy
,
drama
,
fantasy
and roman
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, films, sales, drama, comedy, fantasy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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