Some people say that the best way to teach children to behave well is to punish them. Others argue that rewarding and praising children is a better way to teach them the difference betweeen right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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actions.

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some people hold the view that punishment makes them

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adopt more appropriate

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, tend to adopt a more robust in favour of praising is more beneficial for them to distinguish good from evil. Those who are proponents of punishment claim that

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learn from their mistakes when experience harsh consequences of them.

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, give them punishment in order to show them that their faults would cause

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or regret.

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, some parents do not allow their

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with others if they

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not finish their assignments.

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, it is believed that the fear causes

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these punishments would prevent them from

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replicate

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. It is said that if

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decide to behave offensive or harmful, the fear of

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of their acts could be

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prevented

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governments have particular roles and principles like prisoning, in order to prevent people from

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committing

crimes. Shifting towards the second school of thought, people who are in

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of rewarding

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act as a stimulative factor for repeating their proper behaviours.

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,

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attempt to apply

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. They would be conscious of their positive behaviours if they

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received

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for them.

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reward like outdoor activities could bring about a memorable event in their mind.

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they are satisfied

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their

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activities

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as going to the cinema or park.

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, it would be suitable for their

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mental

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, some studies show that

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who spend more time on outside activities

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be happier adults in the future. In conclusion, from what has been

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could motivate them

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properly,

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boost their mental well-being.

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, punishing

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might control some

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minor

temtations

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temptations

of executing errors.