Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this the case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?

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people

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use bicycles as modes of transportation these days as a

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of possible factors

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as weather and

conveniences

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, others argue that

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concerns can be easily resolved with the

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from both the government and the locals either with financial support or transport services will be discussed

further

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in

this

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essay.

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with, it seems sensible

for

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why bicycles

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its

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attention over

others

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types of

transports

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transport

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.

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is possibly because it requires

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of personal effort and strength in order to ride for one trip and I

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could have been worse if the weather

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bad. They could end up being sweaty and smelly after a ride to work and exhausted

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even if

it is the beginning of the day. In

this

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sense,

people

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would opt for alternative means for commuting to work

that is

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more convenient in order to save up their energy for their work

as well as

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to

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their images since not all cooperates offer shower

room

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.

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, there are a number of solutions to persuade

people

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to ride a

bicycle

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more seeing that

this

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issue can be manageable with the help from the government and individuals. One, offering financial incentives

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as tax

deduction

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or bonuses can be a good deal to attract

people

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ride

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a bike.

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, if

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showering services

is

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offered these can alleviate

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sweat problems and not only improve personal images but

also

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the hygiene

for

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both bikers and others as well. Another is to

offering

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free

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bicycle

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renting scheme as

this

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can appeal to many

commuter

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commuters

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for

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lower their budgets. In summary,

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it is undeniable that riding a

bicycle

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can be

hustling

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and exhausting

modes

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mode

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of transportation that many might avoid to do so, I am of the opinion that with

the

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help from the authorities in terms of financial

aids

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and services like public shower

room

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rooms

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or free bike scheme could possibly promote the usage of

bicycle

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in the future.