Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?”

In our century it is too easy and available to

borrowing

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money

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banks

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and

staying

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giant

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debtor for your own country. And it is one of the main causes why around 85% of residents get into debt and

buying

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unusual items or

doing

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nonsensical actions with

this

borrowed

money

. First things first

i

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want to choose my

country

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citizens as

a

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apply

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big and fat proof of

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trouble. In

Kazakhstan

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Kazakhstan,

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we don’t even have

a

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apply

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strong and strict

low

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law

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about

banks

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credits and any punishment for

people

, who don’t return the

money

,

which

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they spend on

trash

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that they don’t need or can’t afford for themselves.

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,

third

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a third

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of a quarter of

nation

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in Kazakhstan

have

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enough debts. For what all of

this

“headache”? Because there are the most common and one of the general sins which

people

there are have is — contention and showing-off. All of them borrow

money

for

them

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events like

wedding

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weddings

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or

introduction

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the introduction

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of the parents of the couple, who going to marry

and

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etc. Or for buying luxury items like designer clothes, famous

jewelry

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jewellery

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or premium cars.

Also

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there is one type of person who

borrow

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money

to pay off the

another credits

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. That’s literally strange, but it’s the

sadness

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truth and reality.

People

do all kinds of

this

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things because they can and

able

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are able

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to afford

this

not clean system of taking

money

from

banks

or

another

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companies or areas which have

connection

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connections

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and control over

money

. The best

of

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apply

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ways

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is

create

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new low and

punishment

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punishments

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for

this

kind of situation.

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all

banks

and companies could make more strict contracts with their

costumers

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customers

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.

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, on

legal

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a legal

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level

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level,

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they could take

document

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documents

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from

people

, which can

proof

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prove

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the importance of borrowing

money

and describing the main reasons why they needed

money

and credit. If reasons and explanations are clear and really important (like borrowing

money

for building materials for houses or architecture projects or borrowing

money

to start up your own deal or business) and if your pocket can carry

this

kind of responsibility, they can give you credit or duty. In conclusion, being free from any punishment and spending government

money

to

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no purpose turn on

a big debts

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big debts

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. Having a strong

low

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law

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specifically about

this

kind of trouble and working only on a legal basis would solve

this

issue,

i

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believe.