The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at the social center in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

The provided graph shows how many people

were

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

participated

for

Change preposition

in

show examples

five types of activities at one social center in Melbourne Australia over a twenty-year

period

Use synonyms

between 2000 and 2020.

Overall

Linking Words

, it is obviously seen that during the analyzed

period

Use synonyms

this

Linking Words

line graph had upward and downward trends. Getting back to the details beginning of the

period

Use synonyms

number of participants who visited table tennis was approximately 17,

then

Linking Words

increased gradually by

the

Change the article

apply

show examples

2010,

end

Correct article usage

The end

show examples

of the year went up rapidly and reached

at

Remove the preposition

apply

show examples

close to 51 people.

By contrast

Linking Words

, visitors

of

Change preposition

to

show examples

Amaleur dramatics

were

Verb problem

apply

show examples

significant decrease

Replace the word

significantly decreased

show examples

and made up 5 by 2020,

whereas

Linking Words

the

numbers

Fix the agreement mistake

number

show examples

of musical performances rose marginally.

However

Linking Words

, the

numbers

Fix the agreement mistake

number

show examples

of participants who visited film clubs and martial arts did not change much

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

but only fluctuated.

The

Change preposition

At the

show examples

beginning and end of the

period

Use synonyms

visitors

of

Change preposition

to

show examples

film clubs and martial arts were in the same numbers:65 and 37 respectively.