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The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps
illustrates
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 the differences in the town
Langly
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of Langly
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 in the
year
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 1910 and 1950. Over the period, the town has
optain
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obtain
 major differences as it expanded. On the west side of the
area
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, the Townhouses along the Jordan
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Streets
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 are now developed into three main flats, connecting the
jordan
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Jordan
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streets
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Street
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 and
the
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Sherman
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 Street. As the railway line
are
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 demolished, a new lane is added horizontally in the southeast
area
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. In the middle of all three
streets
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 are planted a
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sherman
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 park and a children's play
area
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is
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are
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 added as houses surrounding the
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sherman
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Sherman
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streets
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 and a wasteland and railway
workers
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 cottages are torn down. Next to the new lane on the southeast of the
area
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 are added two more
store
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 than in 1910.
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, the factory and wasteland
is replaces
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 with
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sherman
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Sherman
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 mansions.
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, the laundry and cafe remained in the same place with an enlargement in size.
To conclude
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, the town has encountered new changes, which mainly
focuses
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 on the renewal and
expansions
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expansion
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 of living opportunities.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, streets, sherman with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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