Raising househlod electricity fees is the most effective solution to the problems associated with power generation and environmental pollution. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective in reducing the environmental pollution caused by power generation?

It is often argued that

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increasing

the cost of

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household

utilities can solve the environmental problems caused by producing electricity. From my perspective, It seems convincing that raising household bills would not

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be helpful and that

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problem

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can only truly be addressed by using clean

energy

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sources

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.

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with, day-to-day residential

energy

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consumption only

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account

accounts

for a small part of

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energy

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use

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. The environmental destruction

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caused

by

energy

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production would remain a

problem

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even if residential consumption decreased

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of

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energy

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costs. Factories and businesses should be the ones that are regulated since they are actually the main

energy

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consumers.

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, in the United States, industrial and commercial activities account for more than half of all

energy

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use

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,

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residential

energy

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use

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makes up only 20 per cent.

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, burdening households with higher electricity bills would not lead to a great reduction in

pollution

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.

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, there are other solutions to the

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of

pollution

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. One of the ways to decrease the environmental damage caused by

power

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production is to expand the

use

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of clean, renewable

energy

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. Clean

energy

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sources

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like solar, wind and hydroelectric

power

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do not produce

pollution

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to the same extent as fossil fuels. Developing more

energy

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systems that

use

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these

sources

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would reduce our reliance on fossil fuel-burning

power

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plants.

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, the Korean government currently provides incentives for companies that convert their

power

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supply to renewable

sources

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.

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has boosted the growth of renewable

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production considerably and means that Korea is on track to increase its

use

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of green

power

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sources

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in the near future.

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would result in a major drop in

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overall

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pollution

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. In conclusion, not enough

energy

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consumed

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in households for raising electricity bills to have a positive impact on the

pollution

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problem

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. In

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regard, the issue can only be resolved by increasing the

use

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of cleaner alternative

energy

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resources.