With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.

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new

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resources,

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of people believe that we ought to keep discovering new areas with fossil fuels, but it will make

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more

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for us.

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, scientists claim that there isn’t much

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oil and gas which we haven’t been using.

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, if we continue unpacking new areas, our descendants won’t have any materials to support their factories.

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, a huge number of animals and fish are extinct now,

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drilling platforms, that are especially popular in the USA, and other mines.

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of accidents occur in the Caribbean Sea every year.

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, humanity has green ways to produce

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as wind turbines and solar panels.

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nuclear stations are not completely safe, if workers follow rules, they can produce a giant amount of

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without any

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.

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nuclear powers and their citizens have cheap

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. Admittedly, countries nowadays aren’t able to end using oil and gas, because most

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of land and produce a

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amount of

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.

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projects need financial support.

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, not only governments but

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private companies should seek

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the opportunity to invest in greener and safer means of producing

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.

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that has been stated, in my view mining and

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using fossil fuels harms the environment and is really limited. There

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lot

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of safer and greener options.

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, they are not perfect and

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to be improved.