. You want to buy some computers. Therefore, write to a vendor seeking information and price quotation for the same. In your letter • introduce yourself • give details on what types of computers you are looking for • request the quotation
Dear Mr.Sharma
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I want to buy some computers
within .our
price range.
To give you my background, My name is Simranjeet Correct your spelling
our
kaur
and Change the capitalization
Kaur
i
completed my graduation in computer engineering. Currently, I am doing my job in a company which named as software development services. I worked there as Change the capitalization
I
supervisor
.
Correct article usage
a supervisor
As a result
of this
, I need 100 computers
of
250 GB Change preposition
with
ram
Correct your spelling
RAM
with
22 inches and 50 Change preposition
at
computers
with 150GB ram
. I will order all these Correct your spelling
RAM
computers
when you reply me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
my email. I hope all the Change preposition
to
computers
will be in good condition.
Furthermore
, I request you about the quotation so it will be easy for us to make a payment right away. Moreover
, I request you to please send the vendors
name and phone number if possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Simranjeet Change noun form
vendor's
kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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