. You want to buy some computers. Therefore, write to a vendor seeking information and price quotation for the same. In your letter • introduce yourself • give details on what types of computers you are looking for • request the quotation

Dear Mr.Sharma I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I want to buy some
computers
within
.our
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our
price range. To give you my background, My name is Simranjeet
kaur
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Kaur
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and
i
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I
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completed my graduation in computer engineering. Currently, I am doing my job in a company which named as software development services. I worked there as
supervisor
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a supervisor
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.
As a result
of
this
, I need 100
computers
of
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250 GB
ram
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RAM
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with
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at
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22 inches and 50
computers
with 150GB
ram
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RAM
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. I will order all these
computers
when you reply
me
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apply
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on
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to
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my email. I hope all the
computers
will be in good condition.
Furthermore
, I request you about the quotation so it will be easy for us to make a payment right away.
Moreover
, I request you to please send the
vendors
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name and phone number if possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Simranjeet
kaur
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Kaur
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grammar
Ensure accurate grammar and punctuation usage, such as correcting 'Mr.Sharma' to 'Mr. Sharma' and proper capitalization in names like 'Simranjeet Kaur.'
specificity
Elaborate a bit more on the specifications of the computers to enhance clarity.
clarification
Make sure to clearly delineate reasons for certain requests, like why you need the vendor's name and phone number.
structure
The letter has a clear introduction, body, and closing structure, making comprehension easy.
clarity
You provide a clear purpose and context for the inquiry, which helps the reader understand your needs.
tone
The language is polite and formal, suitable for a business letter of this nature.
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