You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - Thanks them for supporting you - Describe how you spend your time - Explain about your recovery process

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my feelings after
recieving
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receiving
get well
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cards because of an injury I faced. I felt so grateful that in my difficult
time
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everyone
of
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my company became my backbone. I cannot express my happiness when I got gifts
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last
nights
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. By reading your wellness cards
i
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felt very motivated so thanks
alot
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a lot
to assist
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for assisting
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me in my tough
time
. I spend my
time
by
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playing with my dog and
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watching my favourite web series
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netflix
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.
Apart from
this
, I read many of the historical books. It helps me to spend
my
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quality
time
with
me
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myself
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.
Moreover
, I joined some online courses that
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me to enhance my skills.
In
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this
hardest
time
doctor
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me
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I
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to
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do some beneficial
excercise
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exercise
for my leg and
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healthy
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a healthy
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diet and medicines on
time
.
Furthermore
, I try to do some evening walks with
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of my support. Yours faithfully, Simranjeet Kaur
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coherence cohesion
Consider ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single idea for greater clarity.
task achievement
Add more details on how colleagues’ support specifically enhanced your recovery, this will enhance task achievement.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used, adding a formal tone to the letter.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for the context, maintaining professionalism while expressing gratitude.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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