A local annual festival will take place in your area soon. Write a letter to the organiser of the festival. In your letter –Provide feedback on the festival held last year. –Offer some help with organisation of this year’s festival –Inquire about specific details or features of the upcoming festival

Dear Sir or Madam, The reason I am writing
this
letter is to let you know that I am really looking forward to the Diwali festival
for
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this
year
and want to get and share some details
on
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it.
Firstly
, kudos to all the team members for
last
year
's awesome event. Everybody was happy and the food was fantastic. I am expecting the same if not more
this
year
.
Moreover
,
this
time, some of my friends can
also
volunteer for the event's planning and
prepration
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preparation
. Some of them are great cooks,
hence
can lend you a hand with the kitchen staff. There are a few inquiries I want to make for
this
year
's program.
First
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is the venue for the program or is
their
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there
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any specific theme?
Most
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important question
, are
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there any major changes since
last
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event? Please provide me
this
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information as it suits you and I expect a fabulous job from the respected team. Thank you, Your
faitfully
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faithfully
Dinesh
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Task Achievement
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Task Achievement
The letter has a suitable formal tone and structure, matching the purpose of writing to an organizer.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use of greetings and closing statements is appropriate and matches the formal letter style.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • successful event
  • diverse activities
  • community engagement
  • volunteer
  • organize
  • coordinate
  • crowd control
  • logistical support
  • participation
  • upcoming plans
  • feedback
  • enhance
  • details
  • features
  • improve
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