Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons ehy somrone should learn a foreign language . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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think that learning a different
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language
is to travel or
work
in
foreign
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a foreign
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country.
However
, others believe that these are not the main
reason
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reasons
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to learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
. In
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both
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topics
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. In terms of
traveling
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travelling
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and
work
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working
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outside
that
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apply
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the country we
we
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are looking for we must acquire a particular
language
for ease
to communicate
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of communicating
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with their native people.
Otherwise
, we will be unable to talk to people
those
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who do not understand our native
language
.
For example
, my cousin wants to go
Canada
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to Canada
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and that country's main
language
is
English
,
therefore
, he must learn how to speak, listen, read, and write properly.
Although
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, he
have
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to
give
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an
English
proficiency test called "IELTS GT"
after
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that if he
pass
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passes
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this
exam he can go to Canada.
On the other hand
, those who believe that
the
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travel and
work
isn't
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aren't
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the only
reason
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reasons
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to learn a new
language
as it is nowadays, people are more interested
to learn
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in learning
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other languages
to read
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than reading
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books
.
For instance
, most
of
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apply
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the
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non-fiction
books
written
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are written
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in
English
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the English
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language
,
hence
, to read those
books
we must learn
English
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the English
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langauage
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language
.
Moreover
, most of the teaching
system
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systems
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are made
with
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in
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English
, if I want to learn something from
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the internet
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internet
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I must know
English
to understand
variety
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a variety
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of courses afterword I can learn so many skills through
this
language
and it's beneficial for me. In conclusion, in
this
colorful
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world, there is much to learn and much more to know about,
therefore
, we must confess that either for
work
and travel or reading
books
we need to learn a new
language
for it,
also
there is no evidence that learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
is only for selfish reasons.
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