Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
Despite
of
the profit generated, some people think that international tourism Change preposition
apply
have
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has
negative
effect Add an article
a negative
for
their nation. In Change preposition
on
this
essay
I will explain what causing Add a comma
essay,
this
problem and then
I would
offer a few Wrong verb form
will
solution
.
First of all, let us consider that foreign tourists Change to a plural noun
solutions
has
many negative impacts Change the verb form
have
to
the Change preposition
on
country
they visit. They tend to act as they please and obey local rule
. Fix the agreement mistake
rules
For
example
they work illegally in the destination Add a comma
example,
country
using tourist visa
and stay longer than they Fix the agreement mistake
visas
allowed
. Some travellers Add a missing verb
are allowed
also
like to buy properties and build homes or villas on their behalf even they
are not allowed to do so. Correct word choice
though they
Besides
, many tourists does
not pay attention to Change the verb form
do
traditional
values of the people. Correct article usage
the traditional
As a result
, those attitude gives disadvantage
to locals Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
such
as overpopulate
in tourism Replace the word
overpopulation
area
. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Consequently
, this
would lead to many problems like traffic, pollution, and waste problem.
To solve this
problem, people need local authority interventions. As
example, the government can apply strict working Change preposition
For
permit
& property Fix the agreement mistake
permits
rule
, Fix the agreement mistake
rules
thus
tourist
should behave Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
accordingly
. In addition
, local authority
should apply Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
high
tax rate for foreigners who want to work or buy properties in their Correct article usage
a high
country
to get more direct benefit from it. Beside
the high tax rate, destination Replace the word
Besides
country
need to balance Fix the agreement mistake
countries
benefit
given Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
for
foreign tourists, Change preposition
to
such
as comfortable holiday
, high security, and Fix the agreement mistake
holidays
clean
environment so they still get the profit from tourism.
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a clean
To sum up
, unfavourable attitude
toward international travellers could be minimalised with some serious acts from the government and locals Fix the agreement mistake
attitudes
such
as apply
high Wrong verb form
applying
tax
and Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
apply
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applying
strict
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the strict
a strict
rule
for foreign Fix the agreement mistake
rules
tourist
.Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
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grammar
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task achievement
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task achievement
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coherence
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