Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

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the profit generated, some people think that international tourism

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negative

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effect

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their nation. In

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problem and

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offer a few

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. First of all, let us consider that foreign tourists

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many negative impacts

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the

country

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they visit. They tend to act as they please and obey local

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they work illegally in the destination

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using tourist

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and stay longer than they

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. Some travellers

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like to buy properties and build homes or villas on their behalf even

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are not allowed to do so.

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, many tourists

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not pay attention to

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values of the people.

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, those attitude gives

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to locals

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in tourism

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,

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would lead to many problems like traffic, pollution, and waste problem. To solve

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problem, people need local authority interventions.

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example, the government can apply strict working

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& property

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tourist

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tourists

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should behave

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.

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, local

authority

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should apply

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tax rate for foreigners who want to work or buy properties in their

country

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to get more direct benefit from it.

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the high tax rate, destination

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country

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countries

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need to balance

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benefits

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given

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foreign tourists,

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as comfortable

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holidays

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clean

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environment so they still get the profit from tourism.

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, unfavourable

attitude

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toward international travellers could be minimalised with some serious acts from the government and locals

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as

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high

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and

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strict

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the strict

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rule

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rules

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for foreign

tourist

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tourists

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