The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrated the town
center
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specifically ( 1990 and today), declared the big changes compared to the two scenes, and how the government settled new roles like preventing cars and making areas for pedestrians. In the first map in 1990, the district was split
in
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into
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areas for housing at the south main
while
all activities were in the north unless the bank was on the right, and the cars were rounding everywhere Green
Street
Smith
Street
, Old Field
Street
, and Newton
Street
. Nowadays, the scene completely changed
to
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the better by making places to pedestrian cross streets
while
the government prevented passing cars somewhere like Smith
Street
,
furthermore
opined the shopping mall included multiple shops
instead
of the previous individual shops,
in addition
to changing the shape and number of houses, but building 7 building consisted many families compared the old ones ,
however
, there are no changes in other buildings like bank, town hall, library, and a childcare
center
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centre
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words street with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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