The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The graph displayed a fluctuation
change
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three important metals in 2014, they are copper, Change preposition
in
nickel
, and zinc. The graph illustrates the up and down of metal Use synonyms
prices
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every month.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
prices
of these metals turned down until June and Use synonyms
then
increased in July.
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To begin
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nickel
was the one metal with a significant Use synonyms
change
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the
price every month in 2014. it only takes 2 months, after January to May, the Correct article usage
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change
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nickel
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dramatically went down from 6% to 1%. Use synonyms
Then
, it remained stable until June the price dropped again to -3%. Linking Words
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, it slightly increases to -1% in the next period. Linking Words
Finally
, it reached 1% Linking Words
at the end
of the year. An opposite trend was different for zinc metal Linking Words
prices
. In February, only Use synonyms
this
metal increases, Linking Words
while
others drop. Linking Words
However
, a similar pattern of price changes of zinc was seen to be almost the same with Linking Words
nickel
from June until December. an interesting pattern of copper Use synonyms
prices
shown to be relatively stagnant in Use synonyms
change
. From the beginning to the end of the year, it stayed approximately at 2%.Use synonyms
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