The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon . summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The diagram displayed the life cycle of

salmon

in three stages, from eggs to adults.

Otherwise

, it includes two different places, rivers and the

sea

.

Overall

, the pictures presented the first beginning of

salmon

life. They started at the upper

river

, and the lower

river

, and followed to the

sea

where their growth continued. Among both waters,

salmon

stayed longer in the open

sea

.

To begin

,

salmon

eggs were placed in between small stones at the bottom of reeds in the upper

river

.

This

lasts for five to six months before they become a little baby

salmon

. After that, in the second stage, they moved to fast-flowing waters at the lower

river

. It is

clearly

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that the place was the right location for

they

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to grow

become

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smolt until they

reach

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their size approximately in the range of 12 to 15 cm.

However

, it takes a long period of their life about 4 years.

Following

this

, the middle-growing

salmon

then

moved to the open

sea

and lived for 5 years as an adult. On average, these adults have a length of 70 to 75 cm. In the final stage, they went back to the

river

to mate and produce the eggs.

This

occurs for about 5-6 months.