The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon . summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
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The diagram displayed the life cycle of
salmon
in three stages, from eggs to adults. Otherwise
, it includes two different places, rivers and the sea
.
Overall
, the pictures presented the first beginning of salmon
life. They started at the upper river
, and the lower river
, and followed to the sea
where their growth continued. Among both waters, salmon
stayed longer in the open sea
.
To begin
, salmon
eggs were placed in between small stones at the bottom of reeds in the upper river
. This
lasts for five to six months before they become a little baby salmon
. After that, in the second stage, they moved to fast-flowing waters at the lower river
. It is clearly
that the place was the right location for Change the word
clear
they
to grow Correct pronoun usage
them
become
smolt until they Correct word choice
and become
reach
their size approximately in the range of 12 to 15 cm. Wrong verb form
reached
However
, it takes a long period of their life about 4 years. Following
this
, the middle-growing salmon
then
moved to the open sea
and lived for 5 years as an adult. On average, these adults have a length of 70 to 75 cm. In the final stage, they went back to the river
to mate and produce the eggs. This
occurs for about 5-6 months.Submitted by putri on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, sea, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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