You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
•say what the participants liked about the hotel
•explain why they were unhappy about the food
•suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
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Ensure all the points are fully developed and clearly elaborated, especially regarding specific complaints about the lunch food.
coherence cohesion
Improve paragraph organization to ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea.
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Use a more formal tone in your letter and correct spelling errors to improve clarity.
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You included all the necessary points in your letter: feedback on the hotel's location, comfort, and the issues with the food.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is clear with an introduction, main body, and closing.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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