You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •say what the participants liked about the hotel •explain why they were unhappy about the food •suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Manager, I am writing
this
leter
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letter
regarding our company meeting participants
are
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who are
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unhappy
for
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with
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lunch
food.
Firstly
, I am going to tell
about
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you about
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your
hotel
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hotel's
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advantage
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advantages
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. hotel location is
beautifull
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beautiful
, beach
shideview
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side view
is attractive for all our staff. meeting hall
also
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is also
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comfortable
them
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for them
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. they are very happy
for
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about
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your hotel.
Moreover
,
hetel
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hotel
brackfast
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breakfast
it was
vey
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very
testy and
coold
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could
cool
although
you
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your
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are
lunch
had some
broblems
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problems
. they complain
with
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me. that
are
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is
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you did not provide
alredy
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already
said some items. and
lunch
did
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was
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not very
testy
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tasty
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. you have to add some
ingretians
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ingredients
in
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the futur
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futur
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future
.
although
they
adjest
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adjust
to eat them.
you
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have to provide you're
lunch
teastly
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ghastly
in
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the futur
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futur
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future
.
Finally
, I ask you
in
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this
reson
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reason
for
lunch
issuse
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issues
issue
you have to
reduse
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reduce
your food cost. I expect
ypure valuvable
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your valuable
reply.
Yourfaithfully
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Yours faithfully
Your faithfully
Jaam
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task response
Ensure all the points are fully developed and clearly elaborated, especially regarding specific complaints about the lunch food.
coherence cohesion
Improve paragraph organization to ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea.
task response
Use a more formal tone in your letter and correct spelling errors to improve clarity.
task response
You included all the necessary points in your letter: feedback on the hotel's location, comfort, and the issues with the food.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is clear with an introduction, main body, and closing.

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