You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
•say what the participants liked about the hotel
•explain why they were unhappy about the food
•suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Manager,
I am writing
regarding our company meeting participants
areCorrect pronoun usage
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unhappy
forChange preposition
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food.
, I am going to tell
aboutCorrect pronoun usage
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your
hotelChange noun form
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advantageFix the agreement mistake
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. hotel location is
, beach
is attractive for all our staff. meeting hall
alsoAdd a missing verb
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comfortable
themChange preposition
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. they are very happy
forChange preposition
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your hotel.
,
it was
testy and
youCorrect pronoun usage
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are
had some
. they complain
withChange preposition
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me. that
areChange the verb form
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you did not provide
said some items. and
didVerb problem
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not very
testyCorrect your spelling
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. you have to add some
in
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.
they
to eat them.
youCapitalize word
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have to provide you're
in
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.
, I ask you
inChange preposition
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for
you have to
your food cost. I expect
reply.
YourfaithfullyCorrect your spelling
Yours faithfully
Your faithfully
Jaam
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Ensure all the points are fully developed and clearly elaborated, especially regarding specific complaints about the lunch food.
Improve paragraph organization to ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea.
Use a more formal tone in your letter and correct spelling errors to improve clarity.
You included all the necessary points in your letter: feedback on the hotel's location, comfort, and the issues with the food.
The structure of the letter is clear with an introduction, main body, and closing.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.