The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later, you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my disappointment regarding recent flat repairs which
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done on August 22nd. It
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only a month ago but I have started to notice defects in
heating
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the heating
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system and
locks
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the locks
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of
door
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. The city view from
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the apartment
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is great but in
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it gets
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cold and the heating system is giving trouble. Sometimes, it does not automatically change the temperature
according to
the weather so I have to do it manually.
Therefore
, it is disturbing my sleep and causing sleep disorder which is affecting my health.
Furthermore
,
locking
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system
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working past 10 days and each time I go out I have to only use the keys to open my main door. As you know, we have two fogs and one main key
me
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and my roommate
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having a hard time
to coordinate
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. It can be fixed if you
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appoint an electrician from a reputed company who knows well about the issue. I would like you to provide me with a portable fan and
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pair of keys that I can utilize for some time until
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fixed. I hope you will understand my situation and solve
this
problem as soon as possible. Best Regards, Mayuri
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paragraph structure
Break the second paragraph into two separate paragraphs, one discussing the heating system and another discussing the door locks. This ensures a clear focus on one issue per paragraph.
coherence improvement
Use more connectors and transition words. This will help in making the text flow more smoothly and enhance coherence.
suggestion detail
Consider offering more specific suggestions for fixing the lock issue, similar to how you suggested hiring an electrician for the heating system.
structure
Appropriate greeting and closing make the letter formal and respectful.
clarity
The letter clearly states the problems with the heating system and door locks.
tone use
Polite language when requesting solutions reflects a suitable tone for such correspondence.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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