The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by slecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by slecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates a likely future means of house
energy
manufacture.
Overall
,
in
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this
process is over 6 steps and the first one is started by removing the
gas
in compost ferments.
Firstly
, the
gas
is going to the storage where he is located for
further
action.
Subsequently
,
this
gas
moves in a compressor to fill a combustion engine. The second step needs an understanding of physics because after the
the
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combustion
engine
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this
gas
has to transform into mechanical
energy
.
Following
this
step,
this
energy
goes to the generator, which can transform
this
energy
from mechanical into electrical. Exactly,
this
type of power is used for houses. The final stage
,
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is based on transforming electrical
energy
from the battery to the house, so the home will be provided with
energy
from leaves, food and scraps.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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