The technology allowed us to have more ways to communicate. However, some people say that the internet and social network create more opportunities for conflicts and erase the line of respect and appropriateness. To what extent do you agree?

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allowed us to have more ways to communicate.

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, some people say that the

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and social

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create more opportunities for conflicts and erase the line

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respect and appropriateness. To what extent do you agree?” Over the

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has increased beyond our expectations. We can see it every day because of the popularity of smartphones. Nowadays everyone has a phone with

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on it. Because of

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there are different extents of ways in which the

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influences our life. One of the extents of

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is that it helps us communicate with each other. We don’t have to wait till the letter

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to the recipient anymore because it happens for less than a second. So you and your friend can be in different countries but you still can communicate

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you could if you were sitting next to each other in a cafe.

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brings us not only good things but bad things as well.

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, the

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and social

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create more opportunities for conflicts and erase the line

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respect and appropriateness. It can happen because people are not scared to offend each other anymore. They just create an anonymous account and nobody ever finds out who texted them inappropriate things.

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you can be easily fooled because you can meet someone online and

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find out that

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person doesn’t exist and the worst part is that

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would be the best outcome of

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situation. In conclusion, I tend to think that both extents

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because

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helps us a lot every single day, we can have friends from all over the world and never feel lonely. But

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when you use

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you always need to be aware of what you are doing on the

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and who you are talking to. You need to be sure just about everything because if you click on the wrong link you can lose money, or there will be a personal data leak.