It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos, etc.) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

With an increasing number of animals enlisted in protection catalogues, there has been a dissent that

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is a natural process with which

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should not interfere. In my view, the opinion overemphasises the importance of

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so that overlooks

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's determination to preserve themselves by protecting endangered animals.

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the passage endeavours to defend

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's efforts to prevent

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, the supporters of

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with some reasons. For illustration, they are reasonable in claiming that if

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disproportionately intervene in natural progress, consequences are usually beyond control. One compelling example is seen in Australia, where

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scientists once contrived to save

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parrots

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from

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by introducing foxes as the natural enemies of rats, which ate

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' eggs.

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, contrary to the original expectation, the foxes introduced found

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were better prey, which worsened the situation of

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and

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accelerated the

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of the species. In light of

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, it seems plausible to claim that

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's efforts will only exacerbate situations, and they ought to be satisfied with the role of observers.

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,

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perspective to a large degree neglects

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's determination to refuse tamely submit their future to nature. The modern society is highly dependent on bio-products, food, medicine, or textile.

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, it is inconceivable to produce fruits without bees, and

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if humans allow natural selection to exterminate bees, if humans show "respect" for

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, it is not different from committing suicide. In light of

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endeavours to prevent

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as an effort to take control of our own future, which actually is what humans have done across millions, using the brain to emerge from nature. In summary, the passage can understand the apprehension of the supporters of

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, as there are some examples of

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's intervention in natural selection

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undesirable consequences. Despite

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, if we forsake these efforts, it equals

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ourselves totally to nature's control, which is more undesirable, and

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human

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had better continue to explore along the road of stopping

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