It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos, etc.) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

With an increasing number of animals enlisted in protection catalogues, there has been a dissent that

extinction

is a natural process with which

people

should not interfere. In my view, the opinion overemphasises the importance of

Darwinism

so that overlooks

people

's determination to preserve themselves by protecting endangered animals.

Although

the passage endeavours to defend

people

's efforts to prevent

extinction

, the supporters of

Darwinism

are

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also

with some reasons. For illustration, they are reasonable in claiming that if

people

disproportionately intervene in natural progress, consequences are usually beyond control. One compelling example is seen in Australia, where

the

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scientists once contrived to save

land

parrots

from

extinction

by introducing foxes as the natural enemies of rats, which ate

land

parrots

' eggs.

However

, contrary to the original expectation, the foxes introduced found

land

parrots

were better prey, which worsened the situation of

land

parrots

and

consequently

accelerated the

extinction

of the species. In light of

this

, it seems plausible to claim that

people

's efforts will only exacerbate situations, and they ought to be satisfied with the role of observers.

However

,

this

perspective to a large degree neglects

people

's determination to refuse tamely submit their future to nature. The modern society is highly dependent on bio-products, food, medicine, or textile.

For example

, it is inconceivable to produce fruits without bees, and

therefore

if humans allow natural selection to exterminate bees, if humans show "respect" for

Darwinism

, it is not different from committing suicide. In light of

this

, the passage is inclined to view

the

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endeavours to prevent

extinction

as an effort to take control of our own future, which actually is what humans have done across millions, using the brain to emerge from nature. In summary, the passage can understand the apprehension of the supporters of

Darwinism

, as there are some examples of

people

's intervention in natural selection

brought

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undesirable consequences. Despite

this

, if we forsake these efforts, it equals

to submit

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ourselves totally to nature's control, which is more undesirable, and

therefore

the

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human

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had better continue to explore along the road of stopping

extinction

.