It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? au

It has been recommended that machines and mass transit should be forbidden from town and just bikes should be admitted.

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public

transports

pollute the

air

every day around the world and it’s dangerous for

human’s

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human

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health. Every day around the world

the

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transportations contaminate the

air

. In spite of the public

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transport

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transports

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transports,

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we have bicycles and

any

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different variants of them.

The public

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transport has just one advantage and it’s because you can arrive

for

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your destination. And have many disadvantages like the

air

pollution.

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, people need to stop using public transport or destroy them and start to use cycles, we can place bicycles in designated places throughout the city and use them,

although

it’s very healthy.

The public

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transportations

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transportation

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are

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healthy for citizens because of their gas. The gases which

came

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come

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from

transports

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is very dangerous and

it

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can

be

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affect

on

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our breathing places. Every year people die from the polluted

air

of gases and factories.

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, to get rid of

this

problem we can use electronic

car

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and destroy gas

transports

so we can solve

this

problem like

this

illustration. In conclusion,

the

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public

transportations

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transportation

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having

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more disadvantages like

the

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air

pollution of

transports

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transport

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and it can be dangerous for

people

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people's

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healthiness

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health

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