The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart demonstrates the way of unemployed people in the UK
spent their
time
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last
year.
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Overall
, we can see differences between morning and Linking Words
afternoon
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as well as
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women
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Firstly
, people were more likely to do housework in the morning rather than in the Linking Words
afternoon
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time
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afternoon
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while
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men
was to hunt for jobs.
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Besides
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