The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the information about the data of Iranian, Greek and Turkish candidates who
apply
at Sheffield University from 2005 to 2000.
Wrong verb form
applied
Firstly
, in 2005 the students from Greece, Iran and Turkey were begins
with 180, 40 and 20 respectively. Change the verb form
began
Furthermore
, apart from Greek scholars , rest
Correct article usage
the rest
starts
increasing from 2006 and Wrong verb form
started
take
a slight pause in the range of around 100 and 60 and ended up with Turkish by 120 and Wrong verb form
took
greeks
by 180 in 2009.
Capitalize word
Greeks
On the contrary
, Greeks do the quite opposite from other country
citizens , where it holds the top spot in the beginning. But after 2005, a dramatic fall Fix the agreement mistake
countries
were
shown till 2007 with 60 applicants. Change the verb form
was
Then
it stabilize
throughout the year and again after 2008 it shows a significant decrement and finishes by 40 in 2009.
Change the verb form
stabilizes
Overall
, the major trend was up for Iran and Turkey pupils while
, in case
of Correct article usage
the case
Greek
it is vice versa.Correct your spelling
Greece
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