The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Wite at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Wite at least 150 words.
The map illustrates a public
library
floor two decades ago and how it looks today.
Overall
, the
library
is long and wide rectangular in shape and has a main entrance and four rooms in each corner of the building. Over the period the central
library
is completely changed by removing all chairs and tables in the centre and the adult non-fiction
books
in the Eastern
side
and with the addition of some facilities. The most noticeable changes are the reading
room
on the right
side
of the entrance was converted into a computer
room
and the door was relocated from the north
side
to the east
side
of the
library
. The enquirer desk was replaced by a cafe and set up a new door on the left
side
of the cafe. The adult fiction
books
relocated to the eastern
side
of the
library
with some new facilities
such
as the information desk and self-service machines. All reference
books
are now on the west
side
of the
library
.
However
, the children’s
books
room
was replaced by the lecture
room
, which is located in the northeast of the
library
. The
room
had CDs, videos and computer games expanded and replaced with
room
for storytelling events and children’s fiction
books
with added sofas for children to sit on.
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