The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Wite at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Wite at least 150 words.
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The map illustrates a public
library
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floor two decades ago and how it looks today.
Overall
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, the
library
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is long and wide rectangular in shape and has a main entrance and four rooms in each corner of the building. Over the period the central
library
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is completely changed by removing all chairs and tables in the centre and the adult non-fiction
books
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in the Eastern
side
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and with the addition of some facilities. The most noticeable changes are the reading
room
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on the right
side
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of the entrance was converted into a computer
room
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and the door was relocated from the north
side
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to the east
side
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of the
library
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. The enquirer desk was replaced by a cafe and set up a new door on the left
side
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of the cafe. The adult fiction
books
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relocated to the eastern
side
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of the
library
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with some new facilities
such
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as the information desk and self-service machines. All reference
books
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are now on the west
side
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of the
library
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.
However
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, the children’s
books
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room
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was replaced by the lecture
room
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, which is located in the northeast of the
library
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. The
room
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had CDs, videos and computer games expanded and replaced with
room
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for storytelling events and children’s fiction
books
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with added sofas for children to sit on.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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