The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different variables are measured in percentages
The line
graph
illustrates the demographic rates (birth
, inhabitants
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inhabitant
growth
and mortality) between Change the article
the year
year
1940 and 2020 in Scotland. From the line Fix the agreement mistake
years
graph
it can be clearly seen Add a comma
graph,
birth
and population growth
rates decreased, while
death rate
increased during the given time period.
Studying the Fix the agreement mistake
rates
graph
in more detail it can be seen that the birth
rate
was at its peak, with
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at
percent
, in 1940, Change the spelling
per cent
however
constantly decreased later. The death Add a comma
however,
rate
was on
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at
the
highest level Change the word
its
with
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of
percent
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per cent
in
the beginning of the period and Change the preposition
at
then
steadily decreased till 2010. After that, the mortality rate
elevated, being approximatelly
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approximately
percent
in 2020. The population Change the spelling
per cent
growth
rate
from 0.8 percent
in 1940 dropped to 0.5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1945Change the spelling
per cent
,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
rocketed till
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to
percent
in the next ten years. After that, Change the spelling
per cent
growth
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the growth
rate
constantly decreased and there is
no Wrong verb form
has been
growth
at all since 2004.
In conclusion, the line graph
describes that due to
decrease
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the decrease
of
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in
birth
rate
and increase
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an increase
of
mortality Change preposition
in
rate
, the
population Correct article usage
apply
growth
stopped.Submitted by rasav on
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