The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different variables are measured in percentages

The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different variables are measured in percentages
The line
graph
illustrates the demographic rates (
birth
,
inhabitants
Fix the agreement mistake
inhabitant
show examples
growth
and mortality) between
Change the article
the year
show examples
year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
show examples
1940 and 2020 in Scotland. From the line
graph
Add a comma
graph,
show examples
it can be clearly seen
birth
and population
growth
rates decreased,
while
death
rate
Fix the agreement mistake
rates
show examples
increased during the given time period. Studying the
graph
in more detail it can be seen that the
birth
rate
was at its peak,
with
Change preposition
at
show examples
2.5
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
, in 1940,
however
Add a comma
however,
show examples
constantly decreased later. The death
rate
was
on
Change preposition
at
show examples
the
Change the word
its
show examples
highest level
with
Change preposition
of
show examples
1.5
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
in
Change the preposition
at
show examples
the beginning of the period and
then
steadily decreased till 2010. After that, the mortality
rate
elevated, being
approximatelly
Correct your spelling
approximately
0.5
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
in 2020. The population
growth
rate
from 0.8
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
in 1940 dropped to 0.5
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
in 1945
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
but
then
rocketed
till
Change preposition
to
show examples
1.5
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
in the next ten years. After that,
growth
Correct article usage
the growth
show examples
rate
constantly decreased and there
is
Wrong verb form
has been
show examples
no
growth
at all since 2004. In conclusion, the line
graph
describes that
due to
decrease
Correct article usage
the decrease
show examples
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
birth
rate
and
increase
Correct article usage
an increase
show examples
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
mortality
rate
,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
population
growth
stopped.
Submitted by rasav on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, birth, growth, rate, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: