The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows data about how families in one nation spent their seven days profit in 1968 and 2018.
In 1968, food was the highest average weekly spending by families about 35%. Followed by
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goods
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of spending by families. Meanwhile, fuel and power were the lowest percentage
among seven others weekly in one country.
In 2018, The amount of leisure experienced a sharp increase to approximately above
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footware
and food declined almost two times from 1968 to 2018. Correct your spelling
footwear
Then
, the percentage
of household goods
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goods
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Overall
, the average of leisure took over food as the biggest percentage
in 2018. However
, the number of personal goods
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