The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows data about how families in one nation spent their seven days profit in 1968 and 2018.
In 1968, food was the highest average weekly spending by families about 35%. Followed by
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percentage
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about
10%. The number of weekly incomes of leisure and transport had a similar Change preposition
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which the gap was around 1% more or less. Afterwards, the average data Use synonyms
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of spending by families. Meanwhile, fuel and power were the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
among seven others weekly in one country.
In 2018, The amount of leisure experienced a sharp increase to approximately Use synonyms
above
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footware
and food declined almost two times from 1968 to 2018. Correct your spelling
footwear
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goods
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percentage
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goods
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Overall
, the average of leisure took over food as the biggest Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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