The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps show the town of Langley in the years 1910 and 1950 and the
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developments that took place. There were a number of notable changes to the buildings and ame, ties of
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. In 1910, the
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had a combination of residential and industrial features, but by 1960 the industrial features had largely disappeared........... in 1910 a railway line ran through the neighbourhood by 1950
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had been removed. the townhouses which used to dominate the 1910 map had been rep. ced by blocks of flats by 1950, and the areas of wasteland had gone. In 1950
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the development of more commercial and recreational features. The demolition of a second row of houses on Sherman Street and the removal of the railway line made room for a spacious car and children's play
area
. ...... to the right of the park some new stores were built on the aptly named Rew Lane replacing the small store of 1910, and the cafe and laundry were relocated ....., the
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was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes to its residential accommodation, and its commercial and recreational facilities were developed. Model answer
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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